Disclaimer: Who Wants To Be A Superhero? belongs to Pow! Entertainment and
Nash Entertainment. This story is not-for-profit, but I own it.

Date: 07/30/2006

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Male/female sex, male solo sex, voyurism, female solo sex, strong

Category: Het

Pairing: Feedback/Lemuria

Feedback: Yes, I want feedback.

Archive: Yes

Summary: After the other contestants go back inside the secret lair to await
Stan Lee to give them their next challenge, both Feedback and Lemuria share a
little heart-to-heart moment together... which suddenly turns into something

Other Notes: This story takes place after the first episode of the new hit
SCI-FI Channel Reality-TV series.

Dedication: Here's to hoping that Mister Stan Lee and his new show enjoys a
full first season and looks forward to enjoying a second one! -- ATK 2006

Who Wants To Be A Superhero?: New Meaning To The Phrase 'Team-Up'
by Andrew Troy Keller ([email protected])

There's this new Reality-TV series on the SCI-FI Channel entitled WHO WANTS
TO BE A SUPERHERO? and it follows eleven ordinary people who had created
'superhero' personas with an origin, costume and powers and the master
comic-book guru himself, Marvel Comics' very own Stan 'The Man' Lee would
decide whom to eliminate on each hour-long episode until ultimately, the
winner is left standing to recieve their very own Dark Horse comic based on
their character, being featured on one of SCI-FI Channel's original movies
and a trip to Universal Studios Resort to be a participant in one of their
daily superhero parades.

Of course, I do believe that -- just like some other Reality-TV shows --
there might be some certain things that even Stan Lee himself would be unable
to spot, like for instance: it was after one of the other ten superheroes
known as Nitro G (Real Name: Darren Passarello) -- the eleventh superhero
known as Levity (Real Name: Tobias Conan Trost) has already been eliminated
earlier -- had been eliminated for changing into his superhero costume in
plain view of everybody and the other contestants had gone back inside their
secret lair to wait for Stan to begin their next challenge.

Anyway, after the other seven superhero wanna-bes had started doing some
other stuff within the secret lair, the one superhero named Feedback (Real
Name: Matthew Atherton) had noticed that one of his roommates named Lemuria
(Real Name: Tonatzin Mondragon) was sitting on her bed by herself with a
look of sadness on her face, causing a concerned Matthew to walk over to
Tonatzin, sit himself down next to her and say, "Say, Lemuria. I just want
to say that you had done a great job with helping that little girl. Are you
feeling okay?"

That was before a saddened Tonatzin had looked up at Matthew, placed her
gentle hand on his shoulder and answered, "Oooohhhh, I'll be okay, Feedback.
It's just that I'm afraid of what might happen to my cousin if I do something
to cause Mister Lee to eliminate me in the next challenge. Would it cause the
cancer to come back or what?"

And after he had noticed the look on concern for the health of her cousin on
Tonatzin's face, an understanding Matthew had gently placed his hand on her
chin and said, "Look, Lemuria. I do believe that all we need to do is just
roll the dice and see what fate has in store for us. And as for your cousin,
I do believe that he's a fighter and he'll pull through this whole cancer
thing just fine. Okay?"

And then, after she had let out a small smile and nodded her head in response
to her roommate's question, both Matthew and Tonatzin had given each other a
big friendly hug just before they had looked at each other's eyes for a
minute or two and kissed each other ever so passionately on the lips.

Then, after they had placed their foreheads against each other and Matthew
had asked, "Before we let this thing go any further, could you tell me what
your real name is?", a doe-eyed Tonatzin had taken a deep breath and
answered, "My real name is Tonatzin Mondragon. My family and friends call me
'Toni'. What's your real name?"

"My real name is Matthew Atherton. If you want to do so, you could call me
'Matt'," an equally-doe-eyed Matthew had answered Tonatzin's question just
before they had stripped off all of their clothes and he had started licking
all over her bare-ass naked body -- all the way down to her hot, wet pussy
and carressing her firm breasts.

And then, after he had also started pumping his stiff cock, Tonatzin had
placed her hands on Matthew's bare shoulders and said, "Aaaahhhh, yeeeessss!
That's it! Do it, Matt! Touch me! Touch me there! Suck my wet pussy dry!
Aaaahhhh!" just before he had stopped what he was doing and asked Tonatzin
to wait until he had made sure that they were both really alone in that room.

And after she had nodded her head in response to Matthew's question and
allowed him to check some parts of the room, Tonatzin had stared at his
wonderfully-built body and started pumping two of her fingers in and out
of her hot, moist snatch and carressing her own tits with the other hand.

That was before Matthew had placed himself back on the bed, started licking
on Tonatzin's cunt again and allowed her to start sucking on his stone hard
dick, causing the both of them to suddenly realize that they were
experiencing the one thing that they had never experienced with any of the
other superhero wanna-bes before, for they were experiencing pure and untamed
erotica... and enjoying every minute of it.

Just then, after Matthew had placed his stiff cock inside her asshole
and used each of his hands to carress both her tits and snatch, a
sexually-energized Tonatzin had placed one of her hands on his bare
shoulder and the other hand on his bare arm and yelled at the top of

And then, after they had started moving themselves harder and faster and
their lovemaking has made it through its own final elimination challenge, the
two newfound lovers had came and collapsed due to exhaustion just before a
curious Tonatzin had placed her head on Matthew's bare chest and her hand on
his bare shoulder and asked, "Say, Matt? Do you realize what would happen if
Mister Lee and the others had seen us together like this?"

"I sure do, Toni. But one thing is for sure. It really does give a new
meaning to the phrase 'team-up'," a smiling Matthew had said to Tonatzin
just before they looked at each other and shared a small chuckle between
them, snuggled themselves up to each other and fell asleep with their
naked arms in a lover's embrace.

Just then, on the very next day, all of the nine remaining superhero
wanna-bes had assembled in the dinning hall and allowed Mister Stan 'The Man'
Lee to discribe to them the next challenge in spite of the fact that he and
the other contestants were all unaware of both Feedback and Lemuria holding
hands and looking and smiling at each other.



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